...Too obvious.... you must make it more elliptical and metaphorical... you aren´t explaining or denouncing... you are framing literature... playing a " guessing game".... change it... and try to insert a less obvious image....more subtle!!! Don´t forget to drop your welcoming message regarding PEACE!!!
...Too obvious.... you must make it more elliptical and metaphorical... you aren´t explaining or denouncing... you are framing literature... playing a " guessing game".... change it... and try to insert a less obvious image....more subtle!!! Don´t forget to drop your welcoming message regarding PEACE!!!
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